First Screening

Feedback 

On Wednesday 22nd, we showed our title sequence to the rest of the students in the class as well as Miss McGrath and Meredith. Each group filled out a feedback sheet and this included; things we needed to improve on, things they liked and things that were good but needed to be developed further. People said they liked the soundtrack and thought it went well with the video and the contents. However, people said they did not have a clear clue on what the narrative was and that we needed to make it clearer. As a result of this we plan to include more shots that show the transition between younger Jack and older Jack.